stepping out
looking upon
dreaming about
swimming along
crickets chip
animals lurk
I see myself
dreaming upon
feeling what's real
even if it's just a dream
i'm still looking about
wondering what is that sound
still dreaming
dreaming
dreaming upon.
|| dreaming upon ||
feeling:
happy; because The Host is out on DVD today. *fangirl moment*
sad; because Beautiful Redemption wasn't at the bookstore. *sad fangirl moment*
14 happy thoughts
As there are no words I can find to express how lovely and amazing I find this poem, I shall settle for the only word that will fit better than the rest: KEPIC.
ReplyDeletexxLeslie
awwww...I'm blushing... thank you so much Leslie. <3
DeleteBeautiful poem Kenz!!! Seriously, everything you right is so goshdarn gorgeous!!!!
ReplyDeleteTHE HOST IS OUT ON DVD!?!? I want to see that so bad!!! Maybe me and my sis-in-law can rent it and watch it after we finish watching the Harry Potter movies :)
awww shucks, thank you Molly! :D
DeleteIKR!! ME TOO!!!!! Ugh, I wish there was still a blockbuster around here. >.<
thank you for commenting! and reading! :)
did you seriously write that poem? it's so perfect, ugh.
ReplyDeletehaha, yes I did. Thank you so much...I'm smiling really big right now. <3 :)
Deletethank you for reading and commenting!
xoxo
Mackenzie
Awesome poem!
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Hannah
thank you. :)
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Mackenzie
such a beautiful poem. <3
ReplyDeleteaww, thank you Priya! :)
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Mackenzie
I love this poem!! You are an amazing writer!! I wish I could write like you!
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Dahlia
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awww, thank you so much Dahlia. <3 that means a lot to me. :)
Deletethanks for reading!
xoxo
Mackenzie
ASDFJKL. THIS. <3
ReplyDeletehaha, thank you Emma! XD
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Mackenzie
Thank you for taking the time to leave a message, it truly means a lot to me. I try my best to respond to each and every one of them, so come back and let's have a conversation.
xx Kenzie